Mystery Tracks Shh

I watch as he takes notes, wondering if he really is getting this stuff. The word stuff is too informal. (I feel like I am my english teacher!) I believe ...

This is really good! I loved it! I was sad and very...emotional. At the beginning, I didn't know you were talking about the father. But I figured it out later ...

I agree with Silly Sydtix that it sounded kind of off. Even though it was, I thought it was pretty good. I liked it. I usually don't read poems because ...

First of all, very nice descrpitions. The thing I don't anderstand is, what is Kay exactly? A mini unicorn? What's that? it kind of explains it, but actually describe it ...